Correct me if I'm wrong;
'Thoughts of you burst open the crimson', - means that whatever that is on your mind right now is capable of making you burst a blood vessel? or 'crimson dam' could also mean getting your period?

'driven through the river of Fire by an escalating pulse'- hmm..if i'm correct about your period, then you must now be having some bad cramps or it could also mean a desire for some kind of...inspiration, perhaps?

What part might you play next?- ahh..invoking The 7 stages of Men that questions one's role in life by Shakespear ( did i spell that correctly? ). Either that or you're questioning when is your next period?

Posted by mimi @ 04/16/2004 08:02 PM GMT

Lame...

Posted by Beng99 @ 04/17/2004 01:57 AM GMT

hahahaa.. err, it's really got nothing to do with my period.

metaphors..

river of Fire..
crimson dam..

*shrug*

I sure hope the day that thoughts of someone makes my period come won't happen.. otherwise i'd be constantly on pms..

desire for inspiration.. yes.

i'm not exactly a good writer ;p

Posted by fuzzy @ 04/18/2004 07:39 PM GMT

Thoughts of you bursts open the crimson dam;
driven through the river of Fire by an escalating pulse.
What part might you play next?

my version:
tots of u make me vomit blood
very tulan vomit until bohlat
kanasai, u seepeh chialat

Posted by Beng99 @ 04/20/2004 07:17 AM GMT

what exactly is your problem with me, beng99? there is absolutely nothing wrong with having a small penis. i'm not in the mood for this but if you insist on making fun of what i write, then piss off. never said that to anyone here but there's a first for everything.

sticks and stones may break my bones.. :)

Posted by fuzzy @ 04/20/2004 10:02 AM GMT

so u dun like my version eh?
bout the penis and asking me to off, i am not even in u. nobody tells u that a lady shudnt say that word ( off) to a man eh?

Posted by Beng99 @ 04/20/2004 09:43 PM GMT

so u dun like my version eh?
bout the penis and asking me to off, i am not even in u. nobody tells u that a lady shudnt say that word ( off) to a man eh?

Posted by Beng99 @ 04/20/2004 09:44 PM GMT